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I started this book as a joke and it the beginning it was. There were so many cringe parts, so many weird sentences.This whole thing was super unrealistic. I will go through some quotes with you.
Watching him walk up to her front door was like watching the opening scenes of a porno with a semblance of a plot.
Now is that supposed to be a good thing? I am quite confused. Is this what women want, because that sounds boring.
Then we can move on to the fact that it was full with interracial couples. Now I love them, don't get me wrong, but what are the chances that you are a brown girl and your ex-husband is white and you meet some white man and like him. And then we have this:
His step-mom. She’s Black.
It just sounded weird to me. I am not informed if there are such parts where this is the norm, but the step mom was a bit too much for me, too unrealistic.
“Will you cuddle me for a little while? I like the way I feel wrapped in your big strong muscles."
I'll give you a moment to experience this awkward sentence.
There were a few holes in the plot for me, e.g.:
She had to be in Drew’s company for no more than two hours and then she could go a few more months without seeing him face to face.
Drew is her ex-husband who as it is mentioned before gets the kids for a weekend every month, so with that being said, I am not sure how she expects not to see him for a few more months.
Overall it was entertaining but as far book writing goes, this was not a very bright read for me.
Watching him walk up to her front door was like watching the opening scenes of a porno with a semblance of a plot.
Now is that supposed to be a good thing? I am quite confused. Is this what women want, because that sounds boring.
Then we can move on to the fact that it was full with interracial couples. Now I love them, don't get me wrong, but what are the chances that you are a brown girl and your ex-husband is white and you meet some white man and like him. And then we have this:
His step-mom. She’s Black.
It just sounded weird to me. I am not informed if there are such parts where this is the norm, but the step mom was a bit too much for me, too unrealistic.
“Will you cuddle me for a little while? I like the way I feel wrapped in your big strong muscles."
I'll give you a moment to experience this awkward sentence.
There were a few holes in the plot for me, e.g.:
She had to be in Drew’s company for no more than two hours and then she could go a few more months without seeing him face to face.
Drew is her ex-husband who as it is mentioned before gets the kids for a weekend every month, so with that being said, I am not sure how she expects not to see him for a few more months.
Overall it was entertaining but as far book writing goes, this was not a very bright read for me.
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