The Luminous Dead: A Debut Sci-Fi Horror Thriller of Survival and Betrayal

I honestly tried hard to like this book. It just didn’t hold my attention. It’s supposed to be spooky and sci fi like, and I like both of those genres, but it really didn’t seem like either. I suppose a bit sci fi tech-y wise, and there was decent description of her discomfort at times of the suit on her skin, but that can be the case in a diving suit, so… It didn’t feel suspenseful to me. It drug on and on. Some low grade cat fighting with the handler but even that was found lacking as I would never consider that a good reason to read something. It was painful in the slogging on and if not for the club, I would have stopped reading a quarter way in.

This is one of the most tense books I’ve ever read. Like. Eyes wide, not moving while I read kind of tense. Highly recommend.

3.75/5

She'd heard somewhere before that pride came before the fall. But she wasn't going to fall. She was going to climb.

Gyre Price is a liar. She's not an experienced caver and she's never been down on her own but for such huge payout? Well, she's willing to do anything. Sounds simple at first, and with a state of the art suit she expects to be working with a big seasoned surface team. Instead, there's only one person monitoring her, cold and analytic Em who is aware of Gyre's lies and is ready to deceive, blackmail, and drug her in order to get what she wants. As Gyre goes deeper and deeper into the cave, she comes across unexplained situations, like missing equipment, that combined with the harsh geography of the cave and its challenges makes the trek a harrowing experience that might prove deadly.

This was a page-turner that got me out of a mild reading slump. The stakes felt high all the time, I think the author's writing is so atmospheric in a way that really sets the reader in the place of the action. The descriptions of Gyre in the suit, of the cave and the sump, the small crevices, etc., it all worked for me. It felt claustrophobic but also wonderful and new, like we were discovering the cave alongside Gyre and feeling that fascination turn into disgust and terror. However, it was too long and got repetitive at points, this could have easily been 100 pages shorter.

The excess of pages was clear in the relationship and conversations between the two main (and only really) characters. They rehashed discussions over and over again, Gyre changed her mind on Em multiple times, and yet this didn't make their feelings for each other believable. I liked that, due to the circumstances, Gyre has to rely on someone she wasn't sure she could trust and that even with all the suspicions and outright evil actions taken by Em she was a lifeline and connection to the outside world making everything more complicated. But, I just cannot believe that it would lead to a believable romantic relationship, and more importantly, that I should care or like it. If you're going to commit to fucked up shit then fully commit. Give me toxic yuri or give me nothing. This is also why the ending didn't work for me. It wrapped up too nicely and quickly, I expected more trauma. Maybe I'm a weirdo, but I kinda wanted it to end badly lmao, maybe with Gyre dying or with Em turning away from her after all they went through.

After finishing this book I’m not really sure how I feel. I don’t hate it but I honestly don’t feel it was a good time. Gyre is underground in a cave on another planet fulfilling a very expensive, well paid, secretive caving job for her abrasive employer Em. As Gyre gets deeps into the cave things start going worse and worse. Soon she’s struggling to not just survive, but to make it back to the surface in one piece. This book had so much potential! I love survival horror, space horror, and caving stories because I find them so terrifying! This one had ghosts, weird alien worms called tunnelers, and an antagonist that is complicated and Gyre’s key to survival. All the pieces were there but the execution was not. While Gyre was a great character it was hard to relate to the other main character Em who is responsible for Gyre’s plight and her reasons for it are dumb and pretty nonsensical. The author tries to make it sound like her motives have a meaning but honestly they don’t and it makes her incredibly unlikeable and impossible to relate to. Also, the forced romance between Gyre and Em I found really gross. Stockholm syndrome does not equal love, and the fact that this unnecessary abusive and toxic relationship was even a thing, just sat very wrong with me. Gyre would be in a horrific situation and thinking about Em and how she cares for her despite all the abuse Em dishes out. I don’t like novels that glorify toxic or abusive relationships, and this one was so off the rails and really not necessary. In addition, this book is so long and slow with nothing really sci fi going on beyond the suit and these tunnelers that we don’t see until the end of the book and only for a page. The pacing is far too slow, with a majority of the book being climbing and traversal of the cave intermixed with Em and Gyre’s interactions, and Gyre’s slowly unraveling sanity which made this a hard one to get through for me. In the end it wasn’t even worth it because the ending was so anti climactic and again just kinda gross due to the toxic relationship here. This one had so much potential and was honestly a big disappointment.

I was so interested in this book due not only to the description indicating some unknown terror deep in an underground cave but also (silly enough) due to the cover art hinting at some unknown enemy lurking in the shadows.

But sadly, after reading 17 of the 37 chapters (approx. 50% of the book) I just couldn't latch on to this story.

The premise sounded great, but the main character(s) were annoying AF. Gyre constantly lashing out at EM (her "handler" and boss), complaining about the reason for the expedition, and the repetitive thoughts going through her head page after page led me to dislike her very much.

There was just nothing that really jumped out and grabbed my interest after 222 pages and I'm moving on.