Community Reviews
Enjoyable, fun read. The way that the time-travel and effects on the timeline from changing events is handled was cool, and really felt like it all came together in the end.
My only real criticisms are that I think it was a little bloated, and dragged in places because of that, and that the eventual minor villain Mendeg felt pretty unexplained and unexplored. But honestly, even the 'villain' is such a minor part of this that it didn't hurt the story too much.
My only real criticisms are that I think it was a little bloated, and dragged in places because of that, and that the eventual minor villain Mendeg felt pretty unexplained and unexplored. But honestly, even the 'villain' is such a minor part of this that it didn't hurt the story too much.
