Community Reviews
This was such an odd, little quick read - and I do mean quick, it's like...80 pages. It covers maybe 36 hours from Dante & Peter's first date and goes from zero to instalove real fast.
The writing wasn't great. It's bordering on simple & juvenile which ain't good considering the content. Lots of CWs past SA recounted, poor D/s relationsthat really get brushed aside because of the length limitations, and some questionable decisions are made by each MC.
There's better smut out there.
The writing wasn't great. It's bordering on simple & juvenile which ain't good considering the content. Lots of CWs past SA recounted, poor D/s relationsthat really get brushed aside because of the length limitations, and some questionable decisions are made by each MC.
There's better smut out there.
