Community Reviews
The writing is fine and it is the beginning of a story but the first 'book' is really just the first part of a story leading up to the inciting incident which happens at the 90% mark. Since book 1 was free, no big deal but some readers might be bored (lots of filler and not much story) and do just as well to start with book 2.
The writing is fine and it is the beginning of a story but the first 'book' is really just the first part of a story leading up to the inciting incident which happens at the 90% mark. Since book 1 was free, no big deal but some readers might be bored (lots of filler and not much story) and do just as well to start with book 2.